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| comment | | "parent_author":"",<br>"parent_permlink":"writing",<br>"author":"youngky",<br>"permlink":"swc-writing-contest-from-jerry-banfield-the-success-of-satanic-bats",<br>"title":"(SWC) Writing: Contest from Jerry Banfield: The Success of Satanic Bats",<br>"body":"This is a contribution to @jerrybandfield \"Supernatural Writing Competition!\" This is the true story that happened in 1942,<br> this real story happened in Aceh region. This is also an old ceita,<br> when there is still a struggle between Aceh and Japan. This story I got from one of my villagers who are still alive during the war,<br> his age has reached 104 years. At first I just wanted to hear the history of Aceh,<br> but I changed my intention to participate in the contest held by @jerrybandfield. So I asked the grandfather to tell me and I wrote.\n\n\n<center>![Screenshot_20180213_190301.png (https:\/\/steemitimages.com\/DQmU46rthmWmWRbbY7BYeFHi8NEDj3UoPHQiZas2civgcqq\/Screenshot_20180213_190301.png)<\/center>\n\n\nLong before the destruction of the \"Golden Tree\",<br> a Chinese descendant named Funa Yureei was familiar with his fans. He often gives donations to anyone who pays the world of journalism,<br> especially to people who are experiencing distress. Unfortunately,<br> the disaster caused Funa Yureei to almost lose it all. But the allegations are wrong. Because Funa Yureei is not an easily desperate person. A year after the disaster,<br> Funa Yureei was able to rise again. After understanding that Funa Yureei rose again,<br> Mangbagas got up and searched for information where it exists.\n\nBy using the sharpness of the expert instinct of journalists,<br> Mangbagas finally found the home of Funa Yureei. The second level house building is located away from the city crowd. The arrival of Mangbagas was warmly welcomed by a young woman who claimed to be Funa Yureei's private secretary. His name is Suarka. Shortly after Funa Yureei appeared.\n\n\"You Mangbagas? How did you get here?\" Funa Yureei asked with a joking and tight hands holding Mangbagas while shaking hands. Next,<br> the two men were busy chatting,<br> while Suarka came back for a drink.\n\n\"Do you know my secretary?\" Ask Funa Yureei. \"Not as pretty as my secretary who has left the world,<br> but she is very loyal,<br>\" Funa Yureei continued.\n\n\"Looks like you're very suited for her?\" Ask Mangbagas.\n\nBut Funa Yureei actually diverted the conversation,<br> \"We should not talk about the dead,<br> not good.\"\n\nMangbagas kept quiet. In his mind saying,<br> Funa Yureei stepped with the desire to forget (former secretary who has died). Mangbagas can understand,<br> her husband and secretary died in an accident.\n\nSuarka came with a drink,<br> then placed it on the table. After that chat. Mangbagas there is a chance to steal a glance towards him who sits face to face. Suarka beautiful and white smooth. If seen breasts,<br> estimated age of about 20 years,<br> while Funa Yureei has 40 years. It seems that Suarka is more deserving of her son,<br> not her personal secretary.\n\n\"I found Suarka not long ago,<br> about six months!\" Funa Yureei said without being asked.\n\nIndeed,<br> between Mangbagas and Funa Yureei this is no secret,<br> only Funa Yureei who did not want to tell how early he could rise again in a relatively short time.\n\n\"Part of this problem,<br> you do not have to understand,<br> Mangbagas?\" The answer when Mangbagas asked his type. \"It's a company secret!\" Funa Yureei added. \"Meaning,<br> I'm afraid I'll rival you?\" Funa Yureei and his secretary just smiled. He said next,<br> \"You do not go home?\"\n\n\"What is wrong?\" Ask Mangbagas.\n\n\"Incidentally,<br> tomorrow I go to Paloeh Lada,<br> I will check the health,<br> maybe four days there,<br> my maid again visit her sick parents.\"\n\n\"Then?\" Ask Mangbagas.\n\n\"I ask you to accompany Suarka at home,<br> while I am away,<br> I ask you to remember it.\"\n\nInstantly Mangbagas was stunned. Next ask in his heart. Believe Funa Yureei leaving his secretary alone at home.\n\nAs if he could read what was in his mind Mangbagas,<br> Funa Yureei said spontaneously,<br> \"I told you that if the woman is very loyal Suarka,<br> and I am sure,<br> Suarka does not want to invite you!\"\n\nMangbagas smiled. \"Especially,<br> my maid tomorrow is back,<br> how do you like it?\" Funa Yureei half forced. Mangbagas responded with a nod.\n\nThat night,<br> Mangbagas was told to sleep in the rearmost living room near the kitchen and bathroom. The rooms are neat and clean,<br> the atmosphere of the room causing Mangbagas feel at home in the room,<br> so sleep soundly,<br> and wake late. Lol\n\nSuarka who prepares breakfast says that her master's morning has departed. Leave a message alone,<br> Mangbagas does not need to get out. After breakfast,<br> Mangbagas did not want to go home alone. To fill his spare time,<br> he uses two-wheeled vehicles owned by Funa Yureei.\n\nThat night,<br> Mangbagas has just returned. Dinner was already prepared Suarka,<br> while himself was ready to sleep. Previously,<br> he reminded do not forget to close and lock the front door.\n\n\n<center>![Screenshot_20180213_191313.png (https:\/\/steemitimages.com\/DQmb78Lj77oq4KtFRiGC5uCSdwskakPRPz5mCYMgkVtKfUW\/Screenshot_20180213_191313.png)<\/center>\n\nThe outside was dim,<br> but Mangbagas could still see the banana tree in the yard. At first glance there is nothing suspicious out there. Mangbagas leaves the window looking at someone in between the banana trees. Mangbagas was momentarily stunned. In his heart asked,<br> what figure was seen earlier ?. People who have evil intentions,<br> want to steal for example? If Mangbagas is suspected to be true,<br> then immediately prevent it.\n\nMangbagas has made the horses want to strike when the already visible figure is now clear. Mangbagas still waited anxiously at the sight of the woman bending over. Looks like he was busy sorting things between banana tree leaves. After he looked,<br> he held his hand on a piece of paper. Glance like paper money. And that woman is Suarka. He kept bending over to take money from banana to another banana tree. And in his hands full of money.\n\nIf it is real money,<br> where does it come from? How to get wedged in a banana tree? this is really unique and weird. Funa Yureei is a lucky man,<br> having a banana tree that can make a lot of money.\n\nIt's been three nights Mangbagas stay at home Funa Yureei,<br> Mangbagas more curious. Mangbagas is ready to investigate this mystical case on its own. Unfortunately,<br> his mouth could not open when he wanted to get information from Suarka. Somehow?\n\nAs the clock stops at number 12,<br> Mangbagas suddenly sees a large bat flying low and perched on a mango branch near his room. After arriving at the yard,<br> bats are already perched on the banana tree. Maybe already know the arrival of Mangbagas there,<br> then disappear in the dark.\n\nWant to make sure what's behind the bat,<br> Mangbagas immediately approaches the banana tree. Without a moment's hesitation,<br> the roll of paper was immediately opened. It turns out after the opened there is money. Mangbagas's hand shook and did not intend to take it,<br> because the money must have come from an unnatural cause. Mangbagas has an inventor,<br> maybe Funa Yureei befriends stealth bucket. Then,<br> will he be sacrificed? While Funa Yureei looks good? Is there a purpose behind this?\n\nThat afternoon,<br> Mangbagas promised to return to his hometown. But that afternoon it rained so heavily that it prevented Mangbagas from leaving a mysterious house. Heavy rain when Mangbagas sits in the living room. In the midst of torrential rain,<br> his ears Mangbagas catch a smooth sound that can move the hairs neck.\n\nMangbagas stand up,<br> continue to the front window. Opening the curtains made of thick fabrics dna have a flower motif. Keep looking around,<br> looking dim. Apparently the voice came from a group of bats. Animals that flew that night,<br> and spread without a clear direction.\n\nAt the time of Magrib,<br> the number of bats increases. At the same time,<br> Mangbagas turned to the breeze on the second floor,<br> and from there the bats came in and out. Is their home there?\n\nMangbagas was still trying to guess when Suarka was nearby. Without embarrassment he immediately embraced Mangbagas.\n\n\"Help me,<br> Tonight accompany me to sleep,<br> I'm afraid of the bat,<br>\" whispered Suarka seductively.\n\nThe request seemed to seduce,<br> causing Mangbagas to feel depressed by hypnosis. Her Land cats were given fresh fish,<br> Mangbagas resigned when Suarka's hand pulled her into a private room.\n\nIf only accompany sleep,<br> maybe it's normal. The unusual thing is that men and women sleep together and definitely do marital relationships. Mangbagas could not hold his lust when he saw Suarka appear innocent in front of him. Therefore,<br> Mangbagas forgot that Suarka was not his wife.\n\n\n<center>![Screenshot_20180213_191735.png (https:\/\/steemitimages.com\/DQmQPp8Hf3hHpW2mHXDjxwv4oKLSG7EHmZzPLucXM3ar6U5\/Screenshot_20180213_191735.png)<\/center>\n\nUnconsciously,<br> Mangbagas has been stuck with a pretty special game. Marriage is done up to three times,<br> until finally overslept in the pouring rain and lightning strikes.\n\nToward midnight before morning,<br> Mangbagas was startled. Like hearing a strange voice again. Coming from above. Soon he took his shirt,<br> wondering what was going on up there. Visible,<br> Suarka still sleeping soundly,<br> naked.\n\nBefore stepping out of the room and up to the second floor,<br> Mangbagas deliberately covered the blanket. After the sampal on the second floor,<br> the hair on the back of his neck stood up. The mystical aura continued chasing as well as seeing the painting of the naked woman riding a bucket in one of the doors of the room. Mangbagas still confused,<br> from the bottom of the doorway appeared a light. Like a new candle light is turned on. And at the same time,<br> the smell filled the second floor of the room. Mangbagas still stunned when in front of him suddenly appeared a bonfire that flew around the room.\n\nSurprisingly,<br> the size of the bucket grew. Worse,<br> it appears that the creature is ready to attack the Mangbagas. The attack can be avoided,<br> because Mangbagas has martial arts,<br> so the giant attack was not on target. As the bucket was pushed forward,<br> Mangbagas did not waste a chance. Furthermore,<br> the giant Ieher was captured and held firm. Big jaws tried to escape. Mangbagas still thinks how to kill him when his black color turns reddish. Within seconds,<br> it instantly turns into a disgusting blood clot. Bloody clumps of Mangbagas were thrown to the floor. But it looks moving and getting bigger.\n\nMangbagas stepped back as the blood turned into a human figure with a threadless defense. His face is known. Although his face was still covered in blood.\n\n\"You?\" Mangbagas was surprised.\n\n\"Right,<br> this is my Funa Yureei,<br> Why?\n\nAre you surprised? \"That woman is a demon,<br> scary.\n\n\"Long story,<br> man!\" Funa Yureei said sarcastically. \"You do not need to know!\"\n\n\"Why?\"\n\n\"You do not need to know,<br> you have to leave this place before the Devil in my body strangles you!\" He interrupted quickly,<br> threateningly.\n\nSeeing the increasingly bizarre Funa Yureei,<br> Mangbagas immediately did as Fune Yureei instructed,<br> Despite the heavy rain that night,<br> Mangbagas immediately pulled him.\n\nA few weeks later,<br> after Mangbagas was in his hometown,<br> he heard bad news. Villagers gathered at Funa Yureei's house,<br> having a house suspected of being friends with demons. The news said the Fure Yureei house was burned to the ground. Unfortunately,<br> did not get information,<br> whether Funa Yureei hit by the amok victims.\n\nSurprisingly,<br> more or less the following month,<br> Mangbagas suffered from a strange disease in his genitals. The man's tool was festering,<br> and it smelled bad. The pain is not good.\n\n\"You have been cursed by a devil worshiper to heal your illness,<br> you have to drink the meat for seven days,<br>\" explained one of the kebatinan practitioners when Mangbagas consulted his illness.\n\nIt's hard to find to cure his curse disease,<br> so Mangbagas has to sleep in a place because of fatigue. Fortunately,<br> after the bagun,<br> shortly afterwards,<br> the strange disease healed. But the impact is fatal,<br> because his maturity is weak.\n\n<center>![Screenshot_20180213_185851.png (https:\/\/steemitimages.com\/DQmNZM5bKJ1JKYTXBkLNocgxZAXXq1YM5zrMhdtynXFrqzu\/Screenshot_20180213_185851.png)<\/center>\n\n<center>*Well,<br> that's the story. The story was so long,<br> I almost ran out of money to buy coffee and cigarettes to my grandfather. Lol. So here's my writing in this contest,<br> hopefully many will love and read my story. Thank you from me @youngky,<br> also who has read,<br> and all my steemit friends who have followed me,<br> thank you.*<\/center>\n\n*Note: The pictures I took from google as a connector my writing.*",<br>"json_metadata":" \"tags\":[\"writing\",<br>\"jerrybanfield\",<br>\"story\",<br>\"contest\",<br>\"swc\" ,<br>\"users\":[\"jerrybandfield\",<br>\"youngky\" ,<br>\"image\":[\"https:\/\/steemitimages.com\/DQmU46rthmWmWRbbY7BYeFHi8NEDj3UoPHQiZas2civgcqq\/Screenshot_20180213_190301.png\",<br>\"https:\/\/steemitimages.com\/DQmb78Lj77oq4KtFRiGC5uCSdwskakPRPz5mCYMgkVtKfUW\/Screenshot_20180213_191313.png\",<br>\"https:\/\/steemitimages.com\/DQmQPp8Hf3hHpW2mHXDjxwv4oKLSG7EHmZzPLucXM3ar6U5\/Screenshot_20180213_191735.png\",<br>\"https:\/\/steemitimages.com\/DQmNZM5bKJ1JKYTXBkLNocgxZAXXq1YM5zrMhdtynXFrqzu\/Screenshot_20180213_185851.png\" ,<br>\"app\":\"steemit\/0.1\",<br>\"format\":\"markdown\" " |
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